Pressure-test the after-state for measurability
Challenges a drafted after-state for vagueness, asking whether each claimed outcome is observable and proposing sharper, measurable phrasings.
In / outDrafted before/after transformation gap → Critique of vague claims, suggested measurable restatements per outcome
You might say…
“My outcome is 'feel more confident' — and I already know that's not going to hold up when I try to write sales copy.”
What it does
Challenges a drafted after-state for vagueness, asking whether each claimed outcome is observable and how a learner would know they reached it, and proposes sharper measurable phrasings. Used after the gap is articulated to harden it before it becomes a promise.
Trigger: Use after the transformation gap is articulated, to harden the after-state before it becomes a formal promise.
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