Check the promise stands alone without verbal explanation
Reads the draft promise as a cold prospect would and flags ambiguity, jargon, or implied context that requires verbal explanation — iterating until it stands alone.
In / outDraft promise statement → redlined version with specific ambiguities, jargon calls, and implied-context flags; clean revised version
You might say…
“If I had to explain it every time, it wasn't a promise — it was a starting point for a conversation I kept having to have.”
What it does
Given a draft promise, reads it as a cold prospect would and flags any ambiguity, jargon, or implied context that needs a verbal explanation to land — iterating until it is unambiguous on its own. Used as the final pass before the promise enters proposals and onboarding briefs.
Trigger: Use as the final pass on a draft promise statement before it enters proposals and onboarding briefs.
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