Critique a delivered pitch for hedging and sprawl
Takes a transcript or paste of how you actually said the pitch and flags hedges, sprawl, buried lede, and signal blur, with tighter rephrasings.
In / outTranscript or paste of delivered pitch → annotated version with hedges and sprawl flagged plus tighter rephrasings
You might say…
“The written version was clean — what I actually said had four hedges and a two-sentence buried lede, and I only knew because I read this back.”
What it does
Takes a transcript or paste of how you actually said the pitch and reacts as a trusted peer would — flagging hedges, sprawl, buried lede, and where the signal blurs, with tighter rephrasings. Used iteratively until the spoken version is natural and consistent.
Trigger: Use iteratively against a transcript of a delivered pitch until the spoken version is natural, tight, and consistent.
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